Thursday, May 30, 2013

We're back with more tips to help make you a better writer or editor.

Today's topic is something even veteran reporters and editors seem to have a very shaky grasp of:  clichés.

Please bear with me as this post is a bit long, but for good reason: Clichés are perhaps the most common offense in writing and probably the least understood. I'm here to help guide you away from them!

Here are a few prime examples (with a much longer list below) of clichés that ALWAYS should be avoided unless part of a direct quote: leveling the playing field, getting the green light, follow suit, uphill battle, war chest and throwing your hat in the ring.

To me, it's always a good time to remind everyone, professional journalists or simply students writing a term paper or book report, about avoiding
clichés. I'm convinced many writers don't believe it when told clichés are bad and should be avoided "like the plague" (to use another cliché). They somehow think they make stories more colorful and expressive. Please trust us on at least this one point: THEY DON'T. It makes for very weak, unoriginal writing.

The problem often seems to be actually understanding what constitutes a cliché. Here is an extremely simple formula: Unless it literally happened exactly the way you are describing it, it's a cliché 95% of the time. Unless the mayor got handed a light, and the light happened to be the color green, AND that light somehow empowered him to make some decision, he was never "given a green light" to do anything. Unless the city council happens to be playing cards, it can't "follow suit" on something the mayor did. Unless the business is involved in constructing athletic fields, it can't ever "level the playing field." Unless the candidate has a chest in his office and it is labeled "war" and is used for waging a real war, his campaign funds are not in "a war chest." Unless she watched someone spray graffiti on a wall and it was somehow pertinent to her situation, she didn't "see the writing on the wall." And thousands of other examples. REWRITE THEM to clear, precise expressions that do not rely on hackneyed, overused, nonsensical sayings. 
 Again, this goes back to my inaugural post, which mentioned the sin I have dubbed Parrot's Disease
Don't copy blindly what you see, no matter how common it is. Make sure it's correct. My prime example is wrongly spelling doughnut as donut just because you see it as donut everywhere.
Here is a list of just some of the thousands of clichés to avoid at all costs. If you see any on this list that you think are actually OK to use, then I'm sorry to be so blunt but that means you do not understand what a cliché is and why they are a sign of bad writing.

Perhaps Wikipedia's take on clichés will be more persuasive.


A cliché is often a vivid depiction of an abstraction that relies upon analogy or exaggeration for effect, often drawn from everyday experience. Used sparingly, they may succeed. However, cliché in writing or speech is generally considered a mark of inexperience or unoriginality.


It's a huge but hardly comprehensive list (borrowed from http://www.be-a-better-writer.com/cliches.html) that is worth looking over. Ready? I have shortened it from nearly 700 to 300 (click the link for the full list):
 

cliché list:

    A

  1. a chip off the old block
  2. a clean slate
  3. a dark and stormy night
  4. a far cry
  5. a fine kettle of fish
  6. a loose cannon
  7. a penny saved is a penny earned
  8. a tough row to hoe
  9. ace in the hole
  10. add insult to injury
  11. afraid of his own shadow
  12. against all odds
  13. air your dirty laundry
  14. all fun and games
  15. all your eggs in one basket
  16. all's fair in love and war
  17. all's well that ends well
  18. almighty dollar
  19. American as apple pie
  20. an axe to grind
  21. as the crow flies
  22. at my wits end
  23. avoid like the plague 
    B

  24. babe in the woods
  25. back against the wall
  26. back in the saddle
  27. back to square one
  28. back to the drawing board
  29. bat out of hell
  30. be all and end all
  31. beat a dead horse
  32. beat around the bush
  33. bee in her bonnet
  34. been there, done that
  35. beggars can't be choosers
  36. behind the eight ball
  37. bend over backwards
  38. benefit of the doubt
  39. bent out of shape
  40. best thing since sliced bread
  41. bet your bottom dollar
  42. better half
  43. better late than never
  44. better mousetrap
  45. better safe than sorry
  46. between a rock and a hard place
  47. beyond the pale
  48. bide your time
  49. big as life
  50. big fish in a small pond
  51. big cheese
  52. big man on campus
  53. bigger they are the harder they fall
  54. bird in the hand
  55. birds and the bees
  56. bird's eye view
  57. birds of a feather flock together
  58. bite the bullet
  59. bite the dust
  60. bit the hand that feeds you
  61. bitten off more than he can chew
  62. black as coal
  63. bleeding heart
  64. blessing in disguise
  65. blind ambition
  66. blind as a bat
  67. blind leading the blind
  68. blood is thicker than water
  69. blood sweat and tears
  70. blow off steam
  71. blow your own horn
  72. brings home the bacon
  73. broad across the beam
  74. broken record
  75. bull by the horns
  76. bull in a china shop
  77. burn the midnight oil
  78. burning the candle at both ends
  79. bury the hatchet
  80. busy as a bee
  81. by hook or by crook
    C
  82. call a spade a spade
  83. called onto the carpet
  84. calm before the storm
  85. can of worms
  86. cat got your tongue
  87. caught red-handed
  88. caught with his/her pants down
  89. checkered past
  90. chip on his/her shoulder
  91. chomping at the bit
  92. clear as mud
  93. close to the vest
  94. cock and bull story
  95. cold shoulder
  96. come hell or high water
  97. cost a king's ransom
  98. cost/paid an arm and a leg
  99. curiosity killed the cat
  100. cut and dried
  101. cut through the red tape
  102. cut to the chase
    D
  103. dark before the dawn
  104. day in, day out
  105. dead as a doornail
  106. devil is in the details
  107. dime a dozen
  108. don't count your chickens before they're hatched
  109. don't look a gift horse in the mouth
  110. don't rock the boat
  111. don't step on anyone's toes
  112. draw the line
  113. dressed to kill
  114. dressed to the nines
  115. drives me up the wall
    E
  116. eagle eye
  117. easy as pie
  118. eat your heart out
  119. eat your words
  120. eleventh hour
  121. even the playing field
  122. every dog has its day
  123. every fiber of my being
  124. everything but the kitchen sink
  125. eye for an eye
    F
  126. facts of life
  127. fair weather friend
  128. fan the flames
  129. fifteen minutes of fame
  130. fish out of water
  131. fishing for a compliment
  132. fit as a fiddle
  133. fit the bill
  134. fit to be tied
  135. force of nature
  136. force to be reckoned with
  137. fox in the henhouse
    G
  138. get a leg up
  139. get down and dirty
  140. get your feet wet
  141. gets my goat
  142. gilding the lily
  143. give and take
  144. go against the grain
  145. go for broke
  146. goes without saying
  147. green thumb
  148. grist for the mill
    H
  149. hair of the dog
  150. hand to mouth
  151. head honcho
  152. hear a pin drop
  153. heard it through the grapevine
  154. hit paydirt
  155. hold your horses
  156. horse of a different color
  157. hot under the collar
    I
  158. icing on the cake
  159. if the shoe fits
  160. if the shoe were on the other foot
  161. in a nutshell
  162. in a pig's eye
  163. in a pinch
  164. in hot water
  165. it ain't over till the fat lady sings
  166. it goes without saying
  167. ivory tower
    J

  168. Jack of all trades
  169. Johnny-come-lately
  170. joined at the hip
  171. judge a book by its cover
  172. jump on the bandwagon
  173. jump the gun
    K
  174. keep a stiff upper lip
  175. kick the bucket
  176. kick up your heels
  177. kill two birds with one stone
  178. kick his lights out
  179. knock on wood
  180. knock your socks off
  181. know him from Adam
  182. know the ropes

    L
  183. labor of love
  184. land on your feet
  185. lap of luxury
  186. last hurrah
  187. let sleeping dogs lie
  188. let the cat out of the bag
  189. let the good times roll
  190. let your hair down
  191. light at the end of the tunnel
  192. like taking candy from a baby
  193. like there's no tomorrow
  194. lion's share
  195. look what the cat dragged in
  196. loose cannon
  197. low man on the totem pole
  198. luck of the Irish
    M
  199. make hay while the sun shines
  200. make money hand over fist
  201. missed the boat on that one
  202. moment in the sun
  203. more than one way to skin a cat
  204. movers and shakers
    N
  205. naked as a jaybird
  206. needless to say
  207. nip it in the bud
  208. no stone unturned
  209. not playing with a full deck
  210. not written in stone
  211. nothing to sneeze at
    O
  212. off the top of my head
  213. off the wagon
  214. on cloud nine
  215. on his/her high horse
  216. on pins and needles
  217. on the bandwagon
  218. on the money
  219. on thin ice
  220. once bitten, twice shy
  221. one bad apple doesn't spoil the bushel
  222. open a can of worms
  223. open the flood gates
  224. opportunity doesn't knock twice
  225. over the hump
  226. over a barrel
    P
  227. pain and suffering
  228. panic button
  229. par for the course
  230. pass the buck
  231. pay through the nose
  232. penny pincher
  233. play your cards right
  234. playing the field
  235. pot calling the kettle black
  236. pull a fast one
  237. pulling your leg
    Q
  238. quick as a wink
    R
  239. rags to riches
  240. raining buckets
  241. raining cats and dogs
  242. rob Peter to pay Paul
  243. roll over in the grave
  244. rub the wrong way
    S
  245. salt of the earth
  246. scared out of his/her wits
  247. scared stiff
  248. sharp as a tack
  249. shoot the breeze
  250. shoot for the moon
  251. shot in the dark
  252. shoulder to the wheel
  253. sick as a dog
  254. six of one, half a dozen of another
  255. skating on thin ice
  256. slept like a log
  257. slinging mud
  258. sow wild oats
  259. stands out like a sore thumb
  260. squeaky wheel gets the grease
  261. start from scratch
  262. stick in the mud
  263. stuffed shirt
  264. sweating bullets
    T

  265. take the bull by the horns
  266. take the plunge
  267. the real McCoy
  268. the red carpet treatment
  269. third time's the charm
  270. this day and age
  271. throw in the towel
  272. tongue-in-cheek
  273. too good to be true
  274. two cents worth
  275. two peas in a pod
    U

  276. ugly as sin
  277. under his/her thumb
  278. under the gun
  279. until the cows come home
  280. uphill battle
  281. upper crust
  282. upset the applecart
    V

  283. V for victory
    W
  284. waiting for the other shoe to drop
  285. wakeup call
  286. watch your p's and q's
  287. watch your tongue
  288. water under the bridge
  289. wet behind the ears
  290. weed them out
  291. week of Sundays
  292. when push comes to shove
  293. when the going gets tough, the tough get going
  294. whole ball of wax
  295. whole nine yards
  296. wild goose chase
  297. work like a dog
  298. wrong side of the bed
    Y
  299. yanking your chain
  300. you can run, but you can't hide

    Thanks for bearing with me! My next post will be on noun/verb/pronoun disagreements. Stay tuned ...

3 comments:

  1. Avoid cliches like the plague. That's funny.
    I just once I would like to see a news story about a mayor literally getting the green light.
    Making sports writers avoid cliches would make the whole department come to a screeching halt. Um, I mean, it would make the whole department take a lot longer to put out articles.

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  2. hahah! I love the idea of the parrot's disease. There are so many phrases on the list that I didn't realize were cliches- now I know to watch out for them.

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  3. Thank you for finally giving a name to Parrot's Disease; it is certainly an epidemic. I'm a news writer for a college newspaper and I find that so many writers, especially the sports writers as mentioned in a previous comment, rely heavily on cliches. Thanks for pointing out their laziness. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading posts on this blog!

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